Here’s one of my favorite scenes from the Queen of DEEP POV, Suzanne Brockmann. Love being deep in Max’s head as he reacts to sour milk while talking on the phone. Good stuff. Suz could have said: Crap. Max looked at the milk carton and read the expiration date. Suz could have said: He’d taken…
Tag: emotion
The Anatomy of Emotion
I attended a workshop called Words, Words, Words at the Colorado Gold Conference a few weeks ago. As Susan Mackay Smith and Carol Berg waxed poetic about the importance of vivid, precise word choice, I despaired. I have a few strengths as a writer, but vocabulary is not one of them. I find myself particularly…
DEEP POV Lesson 2 – Let’s Get Started
Hello again! Welcome back. Today we’re going to start down the DEEP POV road. We’ll look at some examples and hear what some other authors have to say about going DEEP. One thing I’d like to point out is that we’re not looking at writing in DEEP POV all the time. Scenes or partial scenes…
DEEP POV Lesson 1 – Review of Point of View
Before we get into the nitty gritty of DEEP, we need a basic review of POV (point of view) itself. Here’s the down and dirty on the various POVs used in today’s fiction: First Person – past and present Second Person Third Person Omniscient Third Person Distant Third Person DEEP – past and present First…
GET YOUR HEAD RIGHT
I struggle most with writing when my head isn’t in the right place. What is the right place? For each person it’s different. For me, it’s when I feel good physically and when I feel good about myself, emotionally. Physically, it’s just hard to write when you’re not feeling well, when you’re coughing or blowing…